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SUO: RE: Getting Ahead - Procedures




Dear Jay,

See responses below.


Matthew West
Principal Consultant
Shell Information Technology International Limited
Shell Centre, London SE1 7NA, United Kingdom

Tel: +44 20 7934 4490 Other Tel: +44 7796 336538
Email: matthew.west@shell.com
Internet: http://www.shell.com


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jay Halcomb [mailto:jhalcomb8@attbi.com]
> Sent: 07 September 2003 16:33
> To: West, Matthew R SITI-ITPSIE; Standard-Upper-Ontology (E-mail)
> Subject: Re: Getting Ahead - Procedures
> 
> 
> Matthew: That's a nice start on describing a workable 
> process. It's a bit
> sketchy -- that being the nature of initial proposals, of 
> course. Here are
> my comments and suggestions.
> 
> General:
> 
> 1) It isn't clear if this describes a process for developing 
> ontologies as
> potential candidates for 'the' SUO, or for ontologies to be 
> fitted into a
> lattice of theories, a la the Sowa initiative, which the 
> group has accepted.
> Can this be clarified? 

MW: It is a general purpose process for producing any kind of
deliverable that is a standard. Could be any of the above, and
includes this document itself. The objective is to describe
an open quality driven process to achieve a deliverable that 
has consensus.

> It isn't clear that both tracks might not be
> developed simultaneously (why should they not be? -- but a 
> document which
> aspired to be 'the' SUO would clearly have to pass tougher 
> hurdles than one
> which was proposed as a component of an LOT). Some 
> recognition/clarfication
> should be made of these aims should be made, I think.

MW: I think you are looking for an overall Work Programme
Proposal. John Sowa's proposal is the closest we have to
that. I am only looking to provide a component within that
programme, plus any necessary supporting infrastructure,
e.g. this development process.
> 
> 2) Your proposal describes a formal process, but doesn't address any
> criteria for suitability of candidates. I think some criteria  of
> acceptability (but not a straitjacket) needs to be worked in. 
>  Otherwise,
> SUO and the WGs will have to be constantly reinventing the 
> wheel, ad hoc and
> individually, for every proposal which comes along. My own 
> suggestions are
> to deal with (at some minimum level of specification) target 
> languages and
> logics.

MW: I think that you are describing a separate document that
specifies quality criteria for a particular type of standards
deliverable. I think that is desirable, but not the target for
this document.
> 
> 3) Your proposal speaks of developing a Draft Standard, but 
> it seems to me
> really to be describing a process more suitable for submitting initial
> 'Starter' documents/proposals. I think the two aims (and 
> processes) should
> be separately delineated.

MW: Like Pierre, you seem to have a different idea of what a starter
document is from me, and I have stopped using that term. I am
describing a process to produce a deliverable that is a finished 
component of our work. I take the SUO only to be the sum of those
components.
> 
> Specific:
> 
> a) It isn't always clear to me who is voting on what, when voting is
> mentioned.

MW: Only the SUO Group votes.
> 
> b) I don't think it should be required that a Project Manager shall be
> proposed at the same time that a proposal is made. In fact, 
> this should
> probably be a separate process -- first, proposal, second, 
> selection of a
> PM, after a proposal has been accepted. I suppose that some 
> ideas about who
> a PM might be would be 'in the air' when a proposal was being 
> made, but
> still, these are separate issues. Change "shall" to "may".

MW: In general if you do not have someone to "stick" with the
responsibility for a work programme/project, then you don't have
anything, so I have completely the reverse opinion - no proposal
without a project/programme manager. If there was an alternative
candidate proposed, I would be happy to have a vote within a vote
on who should be the PM.
> 
> c) "The motion may include reference to initial material, or 
> deliverable
> material for any later stages of the process." Change "may' 
> to "shall" -- a
> proposal which doesn't reference any present or future 
> materials is hardly a
> proposal worth bothering with.

MW: OK.

> d) "If the motion is passed the Work Programme becomes a 
> recognised part of
> the Standard Upper Ontology activity." Which activity -- what is the
> ultimate process aimed at? Developing a submission for a LOT, or as an
> ultimate SUO, or both?

MW: The totality of what we are doing here, so either or both or something
else.
> 
> e) I think that more should be said to explain what the 
> phrase "technical
> issues" might mean ( as in "major technical issue", "minor technical
> issue").

MW: Essentially a technical issue is one that prevents the deliverable 
from meeting its purpose. Minor and major are a matter of degree.  I
can really only give more examples. A definition that was misleading
or ambiguous would be a technical issue, rather than editorial, but
probably a minor issue (easy to fix). An axiomatisation that lead to
a contradiciton would probably be a major technical issue. 
> 
> Jay
> 
> 
> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "West, Matthew R SITI-ITPSIE" <matthew.west@shell.com>
> To: "Standard-Upper-Ontology (E-mail)" 
> <standard-upper-ontology@ieee.org>
> Sent: Saturday, September 06, 2003 05:20
> Subject: SUO: Getting Ahead - Procedures
> 
> 
> Dear Colleagues,
> 
> Please find attached a PDF file of a document entitled:
> 
> Standard Upper Ontology Development Guidelines Version 1.0 Draft 1
> 
> This can be considered as a preview of a deliverable of the first
> task in the proposed Work Programme.
> 
> If it is applied recursively, it is draft material for review.
> 
> 
> Matthew West
> Principal Consultant
> Shell Information Technology International Limited
> Shell Centre, London SE1 7NA, United Kingdom
> 
> Tel: +44 20 7934 4490 Other Tel: +44 7796 336538
> Email: matthew.west@shell.com
> Internet: http://www.shell.com
> 
>